Poetry in a Pot...
May. 1st, 2009 04:37 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
What a week!
For the Poetry in a Pot project the students have to write a haiku. It is a difficult form of poetry, at best, but for some reason the kids enjoy them. I use the traditional model of three lines, five-seven-five syllables, about nature and with a contrast. By the time I've read two or three dozen, they all begin to sound alike. Next year, the poem comes first...then the pot. It is exhausting trying to guide seventy/eighty kids in writing poetry of any kind, but perhaps if they complete the difficult part first, they'll be more likely to create some fair images.
I have discovered that haiku is an exercise in:
1. Futility if a teacher fully expects to get a top-quality poem. :/
2. Discipline for the student when I am the teacher and he has to edit time and time again.
3. Patience for the teacher when she is working diligently to guide the student to a decent first line.
3. Revelation for the teacher when she discovers a kid who just won't give up no matter how many edits are required.
Only a few of the students have finished their poems, but all have finished the pots. I think they turned out better than last year's group. I really like the use of different textures and colors together. Even the all-leaf pots turned out great. :D
We began a little later this year so the students had more greenery and flowers to choose from. They brought in many, many more blooms than last year's students.




For the Poetry in a Pot project the students have to write a haiku. It is a difficult form of poetry, at best, but for some reason the kids enjoy them. I use the traditional model of three lines, five-seven-five syllables, about nature and with a contrast. By the time I've read two or three dozen, they all begin to sound alike. Next year, the poem comes first...then the pot. It is exhausting trying to guide seventy/eighty kids in writing poetry of any kind, but perhaps if they complete the difficult part first, they'll be more likely to create some fair images.
I have discovered that haiku is an exercise in:
1. Futility if a teacher fully expects to get a top-quality poem. :/
2. Discipline for the student when I am the teacher and he has to edit time and time again.
3. Patience for the teacher when she is working diligently to guide the student to a decent first line.
3. Revelation for the teacher when she discovers a kid who just won't give up no matter how many edits are required.
Only a few of the students have finished their poems, but all have finished the pots. I think they turned out better than last year's group. I really like the use of different textures and colors together. Even the all-leaf pots turned out great. :D
We began a little later this year so the students had more greenery and flowers to choose from. They brought in many, many more blooms than last year's students.




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Date: 2009-05-01 09:47 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2009-05-01 10:41 pm (UTC)I'll share, but don't expect too much. :D
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Date: 2009-05-01 10:45 pm (UTC)Haiku can be hard but it's hard because of the synthesis of thought required. Still, I find it amusing that they all finished the pots first.
:)
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Date: 2009-05-01 11:38 pm (UTC)I'm hoping the process of haiku will help them think abstractly. Eighth graders are soooooo concrete!
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Date: 2009-05-01 11:03 pm (UTC)looking for inspiration
hear not the T Ching
By the way, I don't know who
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Date: 2009-05-01 11:39 pm (UTC)Um...I hate to be so technical, but that's not a haiku. It's a senryu. ;)
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Date: 2009-05-02 12:58 am (UTC)I like gyoza and sashimi.
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Date: 2009-05-02 02:26 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2009-05-01 11:20 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2009-05-01 11:40 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2009-05-02 02:02 am (UTC)On the way home recently, Gabi and I were talking about haiku - I don't even remember why. She and the A-Team tried coming up with some. She had the idea, but they couldn't get past rhyming words. No haiku was born. But it was fun to try.
Getting the form is easy - getting substance is not.
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Date: 2009-05-02 02:14 am (UTC)You're right...the form is easy. Kids are so concrete, though. My students have the worst time with the contrast.
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Date: 2009-05-02 03:02 am (UTC)They are so pretty, it would be nice to make them last a bit longer.
Any way - I am going to try your pots with the A-Team for Mother's Day gifts! But we will put a flower in them.
OH! I have a friend who used to write haiku on strips of brown paper or parchment - she did it in calligraphy. Then she hung them in the trees with thread. Depending on the season, they would last a few weeks to a few months.
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Date: 2009-05-02 11:10 am (UTC)What a neat idea with the haiku!
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Date: 2009-05-02 07:35 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2009-05-02 04:22 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2009-05-02 11:13 am (UTC)We wrote limericks back in the winter. I had good luck with them last year and the year before, but this year...oh, my! For some reason they can't 'hear' the anapestic rhythm. :/
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Date: 2009-05-02 06:06 pm (UTC)I have even done rocking motions to show rhythm. For example, with Frost's "Stopping by Woods. . ."
"My LIT-tle HORSE must THINK it's QUEER
To STOP withOUT a FARMhouse NEAR..."
I would read the whole poem accenting the all cap syllables while rocking as if I were moving to the rhythm of a horse just slowly plodding along. Of course, some kids caught on more easily than others, but by the time I finished reading almost all of them were "riding" along with me.